Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one!

The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one!

The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

I have tried everything from Allegra to Claritin to Zyrtec. I've been on the shots for years. Nothing works I've heard about several non-Western treatments like acupuncture but have never tried it. Also, I have the rings around my eyes from allergies as well. Dermatologist said he can't prescribe anything. Does anyone know a way to get rid of that as well? Thanks for your help in advance. God bless.

I've been thinking about trying accupuncture, but usually I hear about it for pain management and other things that I don't have problems with. I have some problems that are just flat out annoying. I'd like to know other people's experiences and what they have had treated and/or cured by accupuncture.

The specific conditions I'm curious about are:
skin ailments: acne, psoriasis, excema
low libido
daytime tiredness
low energy
depression
chronic constipation
a horrible "sweet tooth"

...but I'm open to hearing about other conditions that can be treated as well.

Thanks!