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The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one!

The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

Fed up from the side effects of the drugs, people are now shifting towards alternative therapies for the cure and treatment of common problems. Home remedies are one of the alternative methods that have been proven inexpensive and can be easily made at home without many efforts. Since ages our ancestors were using these home remedies for the treatment of diseases but the latest inventions and discoveries in the field of medicines darkened the benefits of these home made treatments. In the recent times the people have again shifted towards these home remedies.

Home Remedies for Acne, Arthritis, Asthma, Anaemia, Backache, Common Cold, Constipation, Eczema, Hair Loss, High Blood Pressure, Indigestion, Obesity, Sore Throat, Stress

Home remedies for some of the most common diseases and problems are:

Home Remedies for Acne

Application of cucumber leaves or grated pieces of cucumber to the affected areas.

Paste of fenugreek leaves applied overnight on the affected area and washed off next morning is also effective.

Mix one tablespoon of besan flour and one teaspoon of lemon juice till a smooth paste is formed. Apply on neck and face and wash off when it gets dry.

Home Remedies for Acidity

Drink a glass of cold milk to get quick relief from acidity.

Drink a glass of water with a teaspoon of baking soda for immediate relief.

Chewing bubble gum will also provide relief from acidity in few minutes.

Home Remedies for Arthritis

With an empty stomach take 3-4 walnuts (akhrot) or 1 fresh coconut.

Spread warm mustard oil on a madar leaf and apply to the affected area for a few hours .

Drink some radish juice with sugar added to it.

Home Remedies for Asthma

Drink a cup of black coffee, the warmth will break up the flem and the caffeine will help to remove tightness from the chest and throat.

Add 30-40 leaves of tulsi in one liter of water, strain the leaves and drink the water throughout the day.

Home Remedies for Anaemia

Eat 2-3 apples daily without peeling to increase the iron stores in the body.

Intake of beet juice is highly beneficial for the anemic person's.

Home Remedies for Backache

Drink some hot milk or water with powdered sonth, meetha soda, and salt.

Massage the back with turpentine oil.

For temporary and quick relief heat can be applied at the back with hot water bottle.

Home Remedies for Common cold

Drink a cup of water with a few drops of garlic oil and a teaspoonful of onion juice.

Rub the chest and throat with camphor water or oil.

Drink honey and lemon juice in hot water to get relief from sore throat.

Home Remedies for Constipation

Drink a tablespoon of corn syrup in a cup of water.

Drink a glass of prune juice to facilitate bowel movement.

Drinking a cup of coffee will also provide relief from constipation.

Home Remedies for Eczema

Mix one teaspoon of camphor and one teaspoon of sandalwood to form a paste and apply on the affected e areas.

Drinking Aloe Vera juice will help cleanse the system.

Home Remedies for Hair loss

Wash hair with peppermint or spearmint tea to prevent hair loss and to promote hair growth .

Wash hair with white vinegar periodically to prevent falling of hair.

Home Remedies for High blood pressure

Mix half onion juice and half honey. Take 2 tablespoons once a day for 1-2 weeks.

Eat two cloves of garlic every early morning.

Eat one Papaya on an empty stomach daily for a month.

Home Remedies for High blood cholesterol

Drinking onion juice daily for a week will lower the blood cholesterol.

Eat a few garlic cloves every day to reduce blood cholesterol.

Home Remedies for Indigestion

Drink aloe vera juice, papaya juice, or chamomile, comfrey, red raspberry, or peppermint tea.

Drinking a glass of water with a tablespoon of baking soda will provide immediate relief.

Home Remedies for Obesity

Eat 10 fresh curry leaves in the early morning for three or four months.

Drink a cup of water with 3 teaspoons limejuice, one-fourth teaspoon powdered black pepper, and a teaspoon of honey every day for three months.

Eat freshly sliced tomatoes with onion and lemon juice.

Drink lemon juice with honey and warm water every morning.

Home Remedies for Sore throat

Gargle every hour with vinegar water or salt water.

Drink hot milk with honey at bedtime for immediate relief from sore throat.

A teaspoon of honey will provide relief from sore throat.

Home Remedies for Stress

Chewing 12 tulsi leaves twice a day, morning and evening is the highly beneficial treatment of stress.

Various seeds such as alfalfa, sunflower and pumpkin are highly beneficial in the treatment of stress.

The use of these home remedies is highly effective and causes no side effects on one's physical body.

I have had Bell's PAlsy for 3 years now. It was severe at first but now is about 70% recovered. I still have ear pain and my mouth is visibly droopy (a bit) I believe the nerves did not heal properly as my eye waters and partially closes when I smile. I'm tired of doing nothing and was interested in accupuncture, cupping or herbal remedies. I heard that in China there are many 'ancient' treatments. Can anybody help? Thanks!

I usually have no luck with herbal remedies, aroma therapy oils, chinese medicines etc. perhaps because they are so complicated to use and I mess things up or am not using them properly. Have any of these things really worked with anyone and what was particularly effective?

Why is it that when talented lives shine bright before the public eye, that talent is cut short because of drink and/or drugs, why do some bright lights of the entertainment world succumb to foods and "comfort substances" which deplete and shorten your life when there are other life enhancing foods, social and medical practices & substances just as easily available such as acupuncture, Water therapy, herbal remedies, religion and so on, when times are tough and life is very stressful.

I look at people such as Whitney Houston and Michael Jackson as examples of whose religious beliefs helped pull them through some very tough personal challenges and whose unquestionable talents have brought joy and happiness to people all over the world.

I think it is very very sad when such bright talents are lost so early in life, in the way that Heath Ledger has been lost !

I didn't notice my shaky hands until jr high. The shaking has only gotten worse. Well I know part of it is because I'm an art student majoring in fashion design so I have to do a lot of stuff with my hands. They do shake more do to fatigue but it can't be helped. Is it possible that I have essential tremor at 18? I do have wrist tendinitis and carpal tunnel, diagnosed by a doctor. They suggested physical therapy which I have tried but it still doesn't work. My hands are just so weak. My mom has ET, but nothing works on her. Her hands are so shaky that she can't hold anything steady no matter how heavy or light. If it runs in the family, I'm afraid my hands will just get worse. My hands are essential to my artwork. If it goes at this rate, wouldn't it just affect my abilities to do things like my mom? Is there a cure? My mom has seen lots of doctors and tried many medications even Chinese herbal remedies and acupuncture. I haven't gotten that bad but I want to prolong it or cure it if I can. Can somebody please help me? I don't smoke, do drugs, or drink/take caffeine so I know they aren't causing my problems. I have tried wearing a cast for over a month so that I wouldn't use my hands but they just became weaker afterwards.

I'm interested in learning more about alternative medicine and herbal remedies for my own personal gain... not for a career or anything like that. Does anyone know of a good website you can look up symptoms and it will recommend herbs? I am particularly interested in a natural herb for weight/appetite control and women's health.

looking for acupuncture that's affordable (under 60$ per session) in the austin area. prefer new age perspective to traditional chinese acupuncture and herbal remedies.

Any acupuncture or herbal remedies?