Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one!

The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one!

The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.

For a while now, I have though I was sick. When I don't feel good, I go lay in the bed, sometimes I have panic attacks. Although I feel sick, I have realized recently that I am making myself feel worse by worrying and making myself think I'm sick. I have bouts of bad anxiety throughout the day and it's getting old! My doctor gave me lexapro and I hate the way it makes me feel! It makes me tired, but when I lay down to go to sleep my arms fall asleep almost instantly as if my blood supply is being cut off or something. And I never really fall asleep...never go into REM. When I'm awake everything seems foggy and dream-like. I stopped taking the medicine because of the way it makes me feel. But I would like to find an alternative...with less side effects. Has anybody had success with acupuncture for stress? What about St. John's Wort?

I'm 44 and just had my first baby 5 months ago. She was a premie and it took me almost three months to get her to latch on properly. Thankfully she can go form breast to bottle but I want to be able to increase my milk supply. So far I have tried several different scenarios...the last one- pumping every two hours. No matter what I seem to try, I usually pump the same amount. Any suggestions? Do you think it's my age? Has anyone ever tried acupuncture for this? I am taking Fenugreek Seed 610 mg three times a day sometimes more. Tried drinking lemonaid...beer. Are there any products out there that someone has tried that worked for them?

Oct 19, 2006

AMERICA'S ACUPUNCTURE POINTS
PART 1: Striking the US where it hurts

A noted Chinese theorist on modern warfare, Chang Mengxiong, compared China's form of fighting to "a Chinese boxer with a keen
knowledge of vital body points who can bring an opponent to his

knees with a minimum of movements". It is like key acupuncture points in ancient Chinese medicine. Puncture one vital point and the whole anatomy is affected. If America ever goes to war with China, say, over Taiwan, then America should be prepared for the following "acupuncture points" in its anatomy to be "punctured". Each of the vital points can bring America to its knees with a minimum of effort.

I Electro-magnetic Pulse (EMP) attack
2 Cyber attack
3 Interdiction of US foreign oil supply
4 Attack on the US dollar
5 Diplomatic isolation
Tomorrow, Part 2: Faced with a China-Russia-Iran triumvirate

Victor N Corpus is a retired brigadier general of the Armed Forces of the Philippines (AFP); former chief of the Intelligence Service, AFP; and holds a master's degree in public administration from the Kennedy School of Government, Harvard University.

(Copyright 2006 Asia Times Online Ltd. All rights reserved.

http://www.atimes.com/atimes/China/HJ19Ad01.html
Best export market ? Your broke and your President spent a week telling people in Asia the cheques in the mail

and invasion never gets mention they intend to cripple you not to occupy you
Rejected
Here let me translate that using Google translation tools

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Brilliant buddy friggin brilliant

I've search on computer but only find acupuncture supplies, and search through their sites, but can't find 'Dry Needles'. Anybody order these, know where to get them, with specifics. i.e, Site and where to find them on the site. Thanks

I'm applying to Johns Hopkins Early Decision. Here's my resume

PROFILE
• Applying to these colleges: UC Berkeley, UC Los Angeles, UC San Diego, University of Southern California, UC Santa Barbara, UC Irvine, Johns Hopkins University, Dartmouth College, Rice University, Stanford University, Claremont McKenna College, Northwestern University, and Bowdoin College

EDUCATION
Walnut High School, Walnut, CA Sept. 2007—Present
Overall GPA: 3.61;
Sophmore&Junior GPA: 3.77
Soph&Junior Weighted: 4.03
SAT I: 2060 (Writing: 660, Math: 770, Reading: 630); SAT II Chinese: 800;

SAT II Math Level 2: 800; SAT II Chemistry: 770

Senior Year Coursework includes: AP Government, AP Statistics, AP Literature, and
AP Calculus BC

Stanford University, Stanford, CA June 2010—August 2010
Coursework included: Astronomical Physics and Bioethics

WORK EXPERIENCE
Acupuncture Chiropractic Center, Rowland Heights, CA Jan. 2009—Apr. 2009
Secretary
• Served as first contact when patients entered the office, answered phones, and scheduled
appointments
• Edited and administered patient forms, filed patient histories, and cleaned gurneys

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
Walnut High School Environmental Care Global Awareness Club (ECGA) Jun. 2009—Jun. 2010
Senior Member
• Spearheaded ECGA partnership with the Robert J. Bernard Biological Field Station at the
Claremont Colleges that involved setting up an open house, weeding out invasive plants in
blooming areas, and setting up plant ID signs
• Initiated recycling program at Walnut High School by implementing recycling bins in each
classroom
• Organized campus and park clean ups at Lemon Creek Park and Creekside Park

Walnut High School Amnesty International Club Aug 2010—Present
Public Relations Manager
• Educate students about current human rights issues
• Organize meetings and presentations
• Discuss current events among other officers
Walnut High School Tennis Team, Walnut, CA Sept. 2007—Present
Varsity Captain
• CIF semi-finalists in 2008
• League Champions in 2007 and 2008
• Starting player since freshman year

Pomona Valley Hospital Medical Center, Pomona, CA Mar. 2009—Present
Volunteer
• Worked in Labor, Delivery, Recovery, Postpartum (LDRP) helping new mothers feed their
newborns, helped nurses with their duties, delivered meals, and discharged patients
• Organized patient records, made beds, and delivered and sanitized medical supplies
• Observed Caesarean Sections and other invasive surgeries

Long Beach Dragon Boat Club, Long Beach, CA Mar. 2009—Present
Caller
• Placed third in annual Long Beach Dragon Boat Festival team rowing competition
• Responsibilities as caller included shouting commands and beating a drum to synchronize
rowing
• Served as paddler on 22 man team with ages ranging from 15—18

Walnut High Advanced School Orchestra, Walnut, CA Sept. 2008—June 2010
Violinist
• 1st violin section
• Performed at school concerts and functions, Disneyland, and in the Walnut community

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION AND AWARDS
• Awards: California Scholarship Federation (CSF), National Honors Society (NHS), and
San Antonio League Student Athlete Award

Could anyone tell me where i can find an acupuncture supply store in Philly to buy needles from? thanks

if someone could help me figure out the meaning of maybe each sentence? please? Thanks =)

There's a war going on for your mind
Media mavens mount surgical strikes from trapper keeper collages and online magazine racks
Cover girl cutouts throw up pop-up ads
Infecting victims with silicone shrapnel
Worldwide passenger pigeons deploy paratroopers
Now it's raining pornography
Lovers take shelter
Post-production debutantes pursue you in nascar chariots
They construct ransom letters from biblical passages and bleed mascara into holy water supplies

There's a war going on for your mind
Industry insiders slang test tube babies to corporate crackheads
They flash logos and blast ghettos
Their embroidered neckties say "stop snitchin'"
Conscious rappers and whistleblowers get stitches made of acupuncture needles and marionette strings

There is a war going on for your mind
Professional wrestlers and vice presidents want you to believe them
The desert sky is their bluescreen
They superimpose explo

Media mavens mount surgical strikes from trapper keeper collages and online magazine racks
Cover girl cutouts throw up pop-up ads
Infecting victims with silicone shrapnel
Worldwide passenger pigeons deploy paratroopers
Now it's raining pornography
Lovers take shelter
Post-production debutantes pursue you in Nascar chariots
They construct ransom letters from biblical passages and bleed mascara into the holy water supplies

There's a war going on for your mind

Industry insiders slang test tube babies to corporate crack heads
They flash logos and blast ghettos
Their embroidered neckties say "Stop Stitching"
Conscious rappers and whistle blowers get stitches made of acupuncture needles and marionette strings

There is a war going on for your mind

Professional wrestlers and vice presidents want you to believe them
The desert sky is their blue screen
They superimpose explosions
They shout at you
"Pay no attention to the men behind the barbed curtain
Nor the craters beneath the draped flags
Those hoods are there for your protection
And meteors these days are the size of corpses"

There's a war going on for your mind

We are the insurgents