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Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too ...
Hey! So can you rephrase this paragraph for me to make it sounds smarter? Oh and for the first sentence to be a "strong" one. I want it too sounds like a really smart paragraph thats organized well. Thanks so much! 10 points to best one! 
The empires of Han and Gupta have many intellectual differences. The Han dynasty had physicians who developed acupuncture to relieve the pain and treat illnesses. Gupta also used medicine but instead using acupuncture, they used herbal remedies. Han’s are consisted of landscape and portrait paintings while Gupta’s art is associated with Indian religion and philosophy; it’s hard to appreciate it fully unless you have knowledge of an Indian mind. The founder of Gupta was Chandragupta who emphasized Hinduism. Chandragupta expanded the empire and strengthened the kingdom by marrying Kumaradevi, the daughter of the king of Licchavis. Lyu Bang, the founder of Han was non hereditary. He picked able bureaucrats and unlike Gupta, emphasized Confucianism. Arose after Alexander the Great, the Gupta Empire, under Chandragupta, showed the belief of needing to be strong in the face of an outside attack. The Han did not. The Han dynasty was run by police, meaning that people inform the police of peculiar actions of citizens. Gupta lived in fear of assassination. The Han dynasty had many creations. They invented the process to make paper from wood pulp, invented paper, porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the writing system which was later adopted by the Islam Empire (known as Arabic Numerals). Gupta also created the numbers one through nine and the concept of zero. Gupta, from their commercial dealings, made massive profit from their own mines and vast crow lands. The Han empire, exported more products then they were getting. Making money from the Silk Road, Han had a great supply of silk that they would export.
This is a good passage, well-researched and interesting to read. The examples are well-chosen and balance well. There is enough material to support the topic sentence.
(But there is off-topic material as well.)
Two of the greatest empires in the history of the world, the Han empire and the Gupta naturally had much in common. But they also had a number of intellectual differences as well. For example, both empires excelled in medicine, but the Han dynasty developed acupuncture while the Gupta stressed herbal remedies. In the arts, both empires created outstanding pictorial work, but Han masterpieces tend to be landscapes and portraits, while Gupta art depicts elements from Indian religion and poetry. The Han dynasty invented the manufacture of paper from wood pulp, and invented porcelain and the loom. Gupta created the symbols which later became known as Arabic numerals, as well as the numbers one through nine, and the concept of zero.
Dear Student:
I think that some of the sentences are off-topic for this particular paragraph, which is about intellectual differences. A second paragraph noting their differences in practical or historical matters might be a way to mention your material, but without writing one long, disorganized paragraph.
I don’t know what you mean by "crow lands." I think you might want to either correct or explain that reference.