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Can any of you help me edit and try to find any typos, grammatical errors, homophones, incorrect sentence structures, or any other mistakes in the wri...
Can any of you help me edit and try to find any typos, grammatical errors, homophones, incorrect sentence structures, or any other mistakes in the writing. Your help is greatly needed! Thank you for all your answers!
Acupuncture is thought to benefit the body by balancing Yin and Yang. Thousands of individuals have practised acupuncture, including physicians, acupuncturists and dentists, according to the NCAM and a report given by the Consensus Development Conference. In addition, a 2005 survey estimated that millions of adults and thousands of children used acupuncture in 2007. This number is reportedly increasing
Acupressure can effect different individuals in different ways, according to the NCCAM. Some will feel slight pain when the needle are inserted while other will be pain free and even energized. Still others may experience a sense of relaxation with treatment. Additionally, The results for weight loss are not guaranteed.
Acupuncture needles are thin and metallic. For weight gain, these needles are applied to certain pressure points on the body to improve health, promote elimination, digestion and increase metabolism. These points include the large intestines, pericardium and stomach. However, the results for weight loss are not guaranteed.
If acupuncture is performed by an inexperienced or unintelligent practitioner, the results could be negative. Improper needle placement, pooor sterile techniques and defect equipment could cause pain and soreness. In addition, the NACCAM reports complications have been reported, including punctured organs and infection. Before seeking treatment, you should try to be sure the practitioner is lisenced and credentialed.
Acupuncture is thought to benefit the body by balancing Yin and Yang. Thousands of individuals have practised acupuncture, including physicians, acupuncturists and dentists, according to the NCAM and a report given by the Consensus Development Conference. In addition, a 2005 survey estimated that millions of adults and thousands of children used acupuncture in 2007. This number is reportedly increasing
Acupressure can effect different individuals in different ways, according to the NCCAM. Some will feel slight pain when the needle are inserted while other will be pain free and even energized. Still others may experience a sense of relaxation with treatment. Additionally, The results for weight loss are not guaranteed.
Acupuncture needles are thin and metallic.these needles are applied to certain pressure points on the body for weight gain, improvement of of health, promote elimination, improvement of digestion and increase of metabolism. These pressure points include the large intestines, pericardium and stomach. However, the results for weight loss are not guaranteed.
If acupuncture is performed by an inexperienced or unintelligent practitioner, the results could be negative. Improper needle placement, poor sterile techniques and defective equipment could cause pain and soreness. In addition, the NACCAM reports has reported occurrence of certain complications including punctured organs and infection. Before seeking treatment, one should try to be sure the practitioner is lisenced and credentialed.
Acupuncture is thought to benefit the body by balancing Yin and Yang. Thousands of individuals practice acupuncture and according to the NCAM, and a report given by the Consensus Development Conference, they include medical physicians and dentists. In addition, a 2005 survey estimated that millions of adults and thousands of children used acupuncture in 2007. This number is reportedly increasing
According to the NCCAM acupressure can effect different individuals in different ways. Some individuals will feel slight pain when the needles are inserted while for others the experience will be pain free and some will even feel energized. Some people experience a sense of relaxation with the treatment.
Acupuncture needles are thin and metallic. To help promote weight loss needles are applied to certain pressure points on the body to improve health, promote elimination, digestion and increase metabolism. These points include the large intestines, pericardium and stomach. However, the results for weight loss are not guaranteed.
If acupuncture is performed by an inexperienced practitioner, the results could be negative. Improper needle placement, poor sterile techniques and defective equipment could cause pain and soreness. In addition, the NACCAM reports complications have been reported, including punctured organs and infection.
Before seeking treatment you should try to be sure the practitioner is licensed and credentialed.
I must be bored, I’ve edited the above for you.
You have discrepancies as in you write once NCAM then NCCAM – which is it and in the first instance you should tell the reader what the initials stands for.
I’ve underlined areas which need your attention –
I think the first underlining should read: In addition, a survey in 2005 estimated that by 2007 millions of adults and many thousands of children will be using acupuncture.
Nos 2: elimination – do you mean going to the loo on a more regular basis? If so just write increased bowl movement or something simple. Or perhaps you mean elimination of toxins?
Nos 3: Considering needles don’t actually penetrate below the skin the ‘points include the large intestines…’ is wrong!
Right, I’m not bored any longer and good luck.
Sorry, just realized my underling hasn’t shown on here – I did it in word, but you can get from my comments where you need to make revisions.